Dissertation Design

I had an amazing Birthday... my girlfriend suprised me and took me to southend on sea for a couple of days.. Amazing! soo so hot.. i have a nice little tan now :D   But now its crunch time.. Iv gotta wack out this dissertation over the weekend.. writing is done.. checked over by a few people too.. so im fairly confident that its fine... now designing... i have spent all of today getting my grid together.. sorting pictures out.. bits and bobs here and there... here is the 10 pages i have done so far...  not final... still tweeks here and there.. i have found there is a fine line between awesome and rubbish.. let me know if i pushed it to far.. or not. :D